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My first drawing with sketch-lines!
So, as you can see, sketching makes my art look a lot.. Skinnier. xD I kind of like it. 8D But give me your opinions! ^3^
This is also my first drawing with shading, so I'd like to here feedback on that too!
I loved Whitestorm. No matter how many times I read the books, his death always makes me cry. Always.
So yeah, tell me what you think.
See you guys!
Enjoy!
Whitestorm (c) Erin Hunter
Art (c) Kittenpawz16/Mango/Me
So, as you can see, sketching makes my art look a lot.. Skinnier. xD I kind of like it. 8D But give me your opinions! ^3^
This is also my first drawing with shading, so I'd like to here feedback on that too!
I loved Whitestorm. No matter how many times I read the books, his death always makes me cry. Always.
So yeah, tell me what you think.
See you guys!
Enjoy!
Whitestorm (c) Erin Hunter
Art (c) Kittenpawz16/Mango/Me
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© 2015 - 2024 Mangojango16
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First of all, AWESOME! Sketch lines are what lots of artists use. The shading is great, you obviously know your darks and lights. The eyes are great, they are shaded with highlights. Try to work on the anatomy a bit more and the nose, other then that everything is great!
You seem to be very creative. Half of the time I can't think of anything to draw, and you have a pose that I don't see much, superb job!
Keep on trying the sketch lines! They help, they really do! Your art looks better with it, practicing always helps! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
Try adding backgrounds. In my opinion it looks a little bland, nots that's it bad or anything, just a little plain.
I like this piece, and first try for shading, wow. When I first shaded I did it around the sides, which you should never do. I did not know my darks and lights, but as I said before you do.
I hope you think this is fair, this is my first critique so it might not be that good. Love the piece! 😁